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Monday, April 20, 2009

As inspired by Nora's haiku of yesterday; one wonders... who planted this tree, and who that bird might be.

this pear tree
in blossoms of memory
a bird tends


Gillena Cox said...

interesting- the use the word 'tends'

much love

Dalloway said...

oh thats lovely

nora said...

really lovely, Magyar. A lovely, poignant image.

RBroeker said...

There are many blossoms in spring-haiku. These are special. I like it!

Best wishes

polona said...

a unique approach to blossom haiku.
i like it

Devika said...

Interesting, Magyar
whoever it is some one should be there to tend, :)


Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...


I find this interesting. I am not sure I have read anything like it. But it does tell a story doesn't it.

Well done.


Magyar said...

_I thank you, friends, for your comments.
_When I was a boy, my grandmother planted a pear tree, and tended to its needs each season, 'till she passed.
_With Nora's haiku I instantly remembered; in fiction here, my mind I saw a bird flitting about through its limbs, tending to the tree's care.

Janice Thomson said...

What a unique and tend(er) image Magyar - love this.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice!

Juhani Tikkanen said...

in a blossoming
pear tree --

Bill said...

"tends" is very good indeed, quite believable as observation and rich in association.