Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
I'm in love with this perfect train song...I love trains, I love the mournful echoes of their distant music ...
Once more without ugly typo:In fog or in darkness we are more sensitive for noise and for sounds. Often a haiku treats this. So did you. Well done.Rudi
fog surrounding an empty station -- express train whistles
Really lovely, Magyar. What an image!
wow! a winter journey comes to mind,good one, Magyar :)wishes, devika
A lovely haiku. Trains are great places to write haiku, what with the scenery changing constantly...
Sights and sounds fall away into the night....
good one, Magyar - 2nd line is a treat
great one Mjohn
What a sense of haunting solace this gives - love this one.
I feel the rhythmn through the coolness! Good one.Best wishesRalf
I like the poem Magyar, there is something about trains, fog and rhythm ...Train wheelsnightly distant rhythmlost in the fogyour words together with Andrew's music Mozart - Pachabel Cannon made me do this little remix (dont tell him he might want some of the credit) I love that music it can wonders to your mind when writing.(second try much better) :)
A good haiku!And I've just read Rudi's comment and I'm Rudi's echo: "...in darkness we are more sensitive...for sounds...". We all know this, you've found the right haiku-words.Best wishes,Angelika
Quickly, before this link fades; in my amazement, I thank you all for your introspective and gracious comments!_m
i like your appeal to sight and sound jutaposed in this one, very nice
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