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Thursday, December 3, 2009

As yet, no snow here; this... from last winter.


footfalls
tracks that find the dawn
night snow

8 comments:

Devika said...

leaving no footprints
they walk into dawn
snow men

Never seen snow or snowmen in my life -- except in movies/books and in some haiku blogs last year...yes, its that time of the year again! :)

Good haiku, and you seem badly missing cold and snow! :)

wishes,
devika

Magyar said...

__Thanks, Dev... another way of seeing these three lines... and very well reasoned, I would say.
__It was, though, a dawning across the previous night's snowfall; leading directly into that sunrise (-find the dawn-,) were the footfalls of a deer._m

Devika said...

so nice to have that note, Magyar :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

excellent - M
john

Lorraine said...

How lovely, I see it, midnight prints :) so light and pretty

BlueJayEye said...

i see it too and could breath its track, love the image conjured by the poem...

Kristin Riggs said...

Lovely, _m. You paint a beautiful picture of my friend, Old Man Winter. ;) Love it.

Bill said...

We may get a little tomorrow night. Also out of the past:

kicking the snow
off my boots--
a light in the window