Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
leaving no footprintsthey walk into dawnsnow menNever seen snow or snowmen in my life -- except in movies/books and in some haiku blogs last year...yes, its that time of the year again! :)Good haiku, and you seem badly missing cold and snow! :) wishes, devika
__Thanks, Dev... another way of seeing these three lines... and very well reasoned, I would say.__It was, though, a dawning across the previous night's snowfall; leading directly into that sunrise (-find the dawn-,) were the footfalls of a deer._m
so nice to have that note, Magyar :)wishes, devika
excellent - Mjohn
How lovely, I see it, midnight prints :) so light and pretty
i see it too and could breath its track, love the image conjured by the poem...
Lovely, _m. You paint a beautiful picture of my friend, Old Man Winter. ;) Love it.
We may get a little tomorrow night. Also out of the past:kicking the snowoff my boots--a light in the window
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