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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Sunday, January 17, 2010

Friends, you know the old saying: "Here one minute, gone the ne


pale stars
my silent schooner sails
a weak wind

20 comments:

Devika said...

very nice, Magyar :)

i like it when the wind is weak...especially near water :)

wishes,
devika

Magyar said...

Dev, Thank you!
__I love the photo, and the sojourning birds. _m

Devika said...

Thanks Magyar...."the bouncy waves" were my focus there :)

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

oh i didn't complete....but thought i'll use that photo as the waves have gone silent! :)

wishes,
devika

Talon said...

Quiet waters can be so beautiful - as can your haiku.

Carol said...

That is how I feel. Like a pale star among others who like to write. It looks like you are not so silent!

Glad that you know Andrew!

ABQ Annie said...

Beautiful :)

joo said...

Another beautiful one!
Good week to you:)

John McDonald said...

yes a beauty M
john

Lorraine said...

Let me count the ways of how very much I love this slow dance...bravo Doug :)

Rudi Pfaller said...

If Basho was a sailor...
I like this pittoresque style. It's classical although Basho was a wanderer.
Best wishes
Rudi

cyclopseven said...

stars, schooner and weak wind speaks a combination of both romantic moment and desperation as well. Well captured. Thanks for visiting my blog.

Dianne said...

following!
we are paled by the forces in Haiti

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

How calming. Darkened water with only heavenly eyes looking down...nice.


soft love,
T

Kristin Riggs said...

Oh...I love the idea of "pale stars". There's something about that line. This is very nice, Magyar. :)

Gillena Cox said...

it must be fullfilling out on the vast ocean, looking and and see even if only pale, stars

much love
gillena

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

lovely.

Magyar said...

__I sincerly thank you all for your visits and comments! Weloome to Carol, and cyclopseven!_m

BlueJayEye said...

slow and steady, on the way to a meditative path...good one M

fivereflections said...

Magyar

i visualize a fog bank gradually diminishing in the gentle sea breeze, while the dim light of stars appear above the masts and sails - i hear the creaking of the mizzenmast - you must be in deep water by the rise of the ground swell!

your post inspires an ocean of images and sounds...