Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
I love the paced pause brtween the second and third lines - in my mind it can last eternity.Thank you
Something so tricky about it....sounds like eternity...even when it could be just the next moment -- good one, Magyar :)wishes, devika
Wow, Doug! Just...wow. :)
That ellipsis adds the perfect touch. We just got some of that pristine snow this evening :)
new snow again and again!As usually love it:)
Fresh snow...so soft :) so ethereal!
such enveloping warmth this haiku projects...
Yes, that ellipsis is so anticipating.
good one Mjohn
Oh, like a clean slate, I like this idea.
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