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Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Pristine snow... .

new snow
paces of those that are...
not yet

11 comments:

julesinspacedancing said...

I love the paced pause brtween the second and third lines - in my mind it can last eternity.

Thank you

Devika said...

Something so tricky about it....sounds like eternity...even when it could be just the next moment -- good one, Magyar :)

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

Wow, Doug! Just...wow. :)

Talon said...

That ellipsis adds the perfect touch. We just got some of that pristine snow this evening :)

joo said...

new snow again and again!
As usually love it:)

Lorraine said...

Fresh snow...so soft :) so ethereal!

BlueJayEye said...

such enveloping warmth this haiku projects...

anotherthingortwo said...

Yes, that ellipsis is so anticipating.

anotherthingortwo said...

Yes, that ellipsis is so anticipating.

John McDonald said...

good one M
john

sandy, from fourwinds said...

Oh, like a clean slate, I like this idea.