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Monday, March 8, 2010

This, is an echo left at Sandy's 'Four Winds Haiga' blog, in complement to her fine post of 3/6/2010.


twilight robin
his breast is the sunset
a night song fades

9 comments:

Talon said...

What a beautiful echo. I can't wait until we see the robins here again. Then I'll know that spring has arrived.

Kristin Riggs said...

WOW! This is just beautiful...wish I had a better word. Using a metaphor instead of a simile makes the statement about the robin so much stronger. I truly love this, Doug.
Sincerely,
Kristin

John McDonald said...

delightful M
john

Lorraine said...

Beautiful sleep iducement with images, well done Doug :)

Henrique Pimenta said...

... an evanescent sculpture...

nora said...

Just exquisite, Magyar. Thank you for this gem.

joo said...

I just can see the little Robin! Beautiful words!

Crafty Green Poet said...

this is very beautiful, a wonderful evening haiku

Magyar said...

Welcome Henrique, and thank you!
__I thank you all for your very kind comments! _m