Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
I'm glad you had some sunshine. We've had some three days in a row which, considering what seems unending cloud cover, feels magnificent."a door opens" - I like that image linked to the sun. Very pretty.
I hope it's the door to spring. It's looking promising here in Arkansas...a beautiful sunny day here today...68 degrees. It was glorious! Lovely poem.-Kristin
an eager flow playing with a sleepy poodle... In Finnish the word "poodle" means also small wisps of dust. When I served in Finnish Navy we got several raids against those "poodles",-)
but that wonderful sun on your face for a few seconds, isn'tit wonderful...so full of promises
...Light enters and brings warmth and the sweet smell of Spring along with it...We hope. Brilliant as always Magyar.Cheers.
we have so much of sun now and not a drop of rain going near on 30 daysmuch lovegillena
I wish the sun peered:)Beautiful words!
no need for invitation, the sun is always a welcomed spirit of any season
great sets Mjohn
In a figurative sense I read about a door wide opened to spring - to a better feeling.Good one.Rudi
Sun peering through and a door opening...a metaphor for enlightenment?
The light causes the blindness.
What a picture your words paint! I like this poem.
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