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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Saturday, March 6, 2010

Moving on...

the sun peers
through this frigid window
a door opens


Talon said...

I'm glad you had some sunshine. We've had some three days in a row which, considering what seems unending cloud cover, feels magnificent.

"a door opens" - I like that image linked to the sun. Very pretty.

Kristin Riggs said...

I hope it's the door to spring. It's looking promising here in Arkansas...a beautiful sunny day here today...68 degrees. It was glorious! Lovely poem.

Tikkis said...

an eager flow
playing with
a sleepy poodle

... In Finnish the word "poodle" means also small wisps of dust.

When I served in Finnish Navy we got several raids against those "poodles"

Lorraine said...

but that wonderful sun on your face for a few seconds, isn'tit full of promises

bonequinhoda bic said...

...Light enters and brings warmth and the sweet smell of Spring along with it...We hope.

Brilliant as always Magyar.

Gillena Cox said...

we have so much of sun now and not a drop of rain going near on 30 days

much love

joo said...

I wish the sun peered:)
Beautiful words!

BlueJayEye said...

no need for invitation, the sun is always a welcomed spirit of any season

John McDonald said...

great sets M

Anonymous said...

In a figurative sense I read about a door wide opened to spring - to a better feeling.
Good one.

Timoteo said...

Sun peering through and a door opening...a metaphor for enlightenment?

Henrique Pimenta said...

The light causes the blindness.

Anonymous said...

What a picture your words paint! I like this poem.