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Saturday, March 27, 2010

A repetitive parallel:
Sometimes, I need to step back... to see where I wish to go.


look beyond
see of that pebble
this ruby

11 comments:

RBroeker said...
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RBroeker said...

Very difficult for me. At least it is an abstract scene: one has to decide. And one side promises comfort.

Best wishes
Ralf

PS: It was a long haiku-day. so please forgive my mistakes.

Talon said...

Magyar, I loved this when I read your comment on Lorraine's blog. Sometimes we do need to get a sense of the bigger picture.

Lorraine said...

Love it, then and Now, wonderful Doug

fourwindshaiga said...

So often, we look right past the rubies. This is a good stop and think poem.

Margie said...

This is quite wonderful!
Love it!

Margie :)

old pajamas said...

Magyar,

Stirring my imagination, this poem. Thank you.....pajamas

Kristin Riggs said...

You are fantastic! I love the way you make me think about my own life when you are reflecting on yours.

John McDonald said...

love it
john

Timoteo said...

What I'm getting from this: Look past the exterior to see the diamond (or in this case ruby) in the rough.