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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Friday, March 19, 2010

Sometimes, I need to step back... to see where I wish to go.


warm new rain
beats this trash can lid
a crocus blooms

13 comments:

Kristin Riggs said...

A nice rain is good for the soul. :) We all need to step back now and again. Love this, _m. ;)

Kristin

p.s. Thanks so much for the warm spring break wishes. I will enjoy my time off!!! :)

Talon said...

Taking those steps back is wise and something I'm finally learning to do (being the type that rushes into things). I loved the contrast between trash and crocus. The crocus are just peeking their noses out in the garden here.

Lorraine said...

Let nature breathe and the most amazing words appear, yours Doug, wow

John McDonald said...

nice one M
john

fourwindshaiga said...

I can just hear the water drumming.

Here is one on the same subject that has been waiting for a shot of a tin roof.

raindrops bounce
off the old metal roof
timeless rhythm

Gillena Cox said...

nice one and lucky you we smelt the rain last wee but it was just a trace, not enought to hear it

much love
gillena

Timoteo said...

Rain is good for nature...and dirty garbage can lids too. :)

Margie said...

So very nice!
I really enjoyed this one!

Margie :)

Sophie said...

a step back...to move foward...
wow amazing lines
i have to bookmark your site
thanks for penning such amazing thoughts

I came here from margie's blog

BlueJayEye said...

there is a virtue in introspection, i like how the haiku complete your opening narrative

Tikkis said...

;-)

covering
old trashes --
the crocus blooms

Magyar said...

__I thank you, my friends, for your kind visits, and over kind comments. _m

Kelly M. said...

love the rackety sounds of this haiku softened by the crocus bloom!