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Wednesday, June 2, 2010

An instant's Cinquain echo... left at Cynthea's blog, in response to her good post. _m


my soul
above the flame
from out of this smoke reaches
grasping at every memory
ashes

11 comments:

Rachel said...

Lieber Magyar,

das habe ich sofort verinnerlicht, das bleibt im mir..

wundervoll wieder...

herzlichst, Rachel

Lorraine said...

how can we not be them? I am very touched

joo said...

Simply beautiful!
Greetings:)

TALON said...

That is simply beautiful, Magyar.

fourwindshaiga said...

NIce! Your responses are always so good.

John McDonald said...

love it M
john

Timoteo said...

Whoa...

Sam!! said...

Lovely!!

Thanks for sharing..

Take care

Gillena Cox said...

memories keep us in touch with the quale of time and its dynamics

much love
gillena

Magyar said...

__From the pond... a moment's connex... I thank tou all, my friends; such fine comments! _m

nora said...

Truly exquisite, Magyar.