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Tuesday, August 17, 2010

A reaction, an instant's echo left at John's... Zen Speug; a reflection of his good haiku. _m


scarecrow
standing at the field's edge
a bus stops

14 comments:

BB said...

This one...very visual.
Can almost imagine the colors.

Ashi said...

By all means let him go to Scotland, a good Magyar

TALON said...

I almost read this like the city encroaching on the country. And then I think what need of a scarecrow when the noisy buses are nearby? Interesting one, Magyar!

Frank said...

A very vivid haiku...

sandy, from gardenpath said...

I liked this one, too. Had to laugh, crows are raising a fuss in my backyard now, I should peek out to see what it is about, I guess.

John McDonald said...

a wee beauty M
john

Lorraine said...

lol I love it i can only imagine the bird entering the bus and little screeching noises from the people ;)

Frieda said...

beautiful. I agree with Frank, it is very vivid.

Ralf Bröker said...

These s sound like ... what they are ment to be.

Best wishes
Ralf

Rudi Pfaller said...

Funny! The scarescrow must be made well. Will it get on the bus?

Best wishes
Rudi

Rachel said...

Na, du großer Meister des Haiku,

nun habe ich alles nachgelesen, was ich versäumt habe, als ich im Krankenhaus war und ich muss sagen, du hast wundervolle Erkenntnisse dabei, ich bewundere dich

lieb, Rachel

Magyar said...
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Timoteo said...

How easily we can be tricked by the eye...and the mind...liked it a lot.

tasmith1122 said...

Very nice. I love the shifting view in this. Happy to return your visit. I know I'll be back.