Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
"Give me some sunshineGive me some rainGive me another chanceI wanna grow up once again"i am listening to a song -- it suited this haiku, i thought :)good haiku, Magyar :)wishes, devika
Very nice haiku, Magyar...
I am charmed, wow Doug...
So evocative...the rain does stain the world, especially the leaves. Lovely, as always, D!My word verification is "mistmen" - seems very fitting :)
A watercolored leaf! I like that one.I am going to look that form, not being familiar with it, but I do know I like that second poem.
Sandy, sedoka... linked ideas, two stanzas of three lines, 5-7-7 in structure. I really thank you for your interest!Kim, Ah yes! The enhancement that rain can give; in its dank it can offer a special light. I truely Thank you. Always, one of the 'mistmen'.I've charmed you LL?And Frank... from you, someone that writes such remarkable haiku... I thank you.Always growingrain and sun,with a chance to dance...this tree.__I heard you singing, Dear Dev!
nice pair Mjohn
I love the colour branches turn when wet. Such delightful images M!
Os detalhes tonitruam.Gostei!
How can oneDescribe silence with words ?....................................
I like the two stanzas very much.
John, I do so appreciate your visits and comments!Janice... the letter U in words such as coloUr... I think should be there!BB... we think alike!Henrique, I think you offered your thunderous applause... thanks!Frida... I'm so happy to have your comments!Thanks friends!! _M
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