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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Some changes.


this wreath
pearled with new snow
a bell

14 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

lovely lovely snow haiku; especilly like Line Two

much love
gillena

TALON said...

Your haiku always paint a perfect and complete picture in my mind, D.

Janice Thomson said...

So appropriate for the season too...delightful haiku M.

joo said...

'pearled with new snow' - I love it!

Frieda said...

how delightful!

sandy said...

what a beautiful image is so few words!

John McDonald said...

well done M
john

Lorraine said...

Oh that is so beautiful Doug, I see I hear and I love

Devika said...

Wreath? No! if may say, you have a bouquet here, Magyar...be sure to pass it on! :)

Beautiful haiku,

wishes,
devika

Magyar said...

__My friends, I thank all of you; your comments had overcome me!

__The change. I'm attempting to return to [as I rightly or wrongly consider] proper haiku, scribbled at the moment it occurs, and too, the avoidance of my over-used "crutch" word... -this-.
__To repeat! I thank you all! _m

LadyArt said...

...kigo finest haiku, you feel the icy "young" freshness of the snow, a delight...

gabriele

Magyar said...

__Good to see you again Gabriele, thanks for your visit and kind comment!
_m

Henrique Pimenta said...

bela imagem

susane said...

Indeed, this achievement is a real wonder, thank you for this article in any case.

voyante