Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
I love baseball and this haiku!
took me a second, but I got it lol love it Doug
Let the games begin! It's great to have the warm weather season slowly heating up - seriously slowly because we got more snow again last night! UGH!!!
great one john
Evocative one Magyar - it's been a couple years since I've watched baseball - it was a fun thing to do in the evenings...
I read a couple of times to get the essence behind. Lovely post. My wishes!
Kathy and I sit in the dark and share some soft talk as we listen to the game on the radio; summer nights outside at our pond.LL... you made it to Second! A double, good hit!K... soon, the green will burn through that blanket of white; take your base!John... and we hear the "crickets" in the dark, thanks friend.Jan... Kathy and I do, from time to time, go to the minor league games, but since I watch very little TV... I can't remember the last TV game I saw... a strike-out!Pranavam... thanks for the understanding, is baseball popularly known where you live?Kay... I do, so thank you for your visit and comment... and I do enjoy too, your colorful work!I thank you all! _m
This haiku has a lot of energy, Magyar...
I guess I am just not a fan of baseball, because I read this as something much deeper. It is really a lovely piece.
hooray and pass the popcorn!
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