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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Sunday, June 12, 2011

At the pond, thunder storms during the last three evenings... but the hummingbirds still visited the nectar feeders... in the beginning rains.
__If I used the word -the- (I think) it could point to -all- hummingbirds;  the word -this-  [I rightly (or wrongly) think] refers to... that -one- hummingbird in my sight... the one that spawned my "Scribble" below.   


thunder
of this hummingbirds wings
rain drops

10 comments:

sandy said...

Oh, this is grand!

Judie said...

I heard that thundering sound just today! When the feeder is empty or clogged with bees, they always come to fetch me!!

joo said...

I almost see them:)
Have a nice week!

Cindybrown said...

we had thunderstorms as well..I love hummingbirds!!! I will sit in my swing and watch them for the longest..I loved this one!!!

TALON said...

Yes, that is one lovely hummingbird tucked inside your lovely haiku, D!

John McDonald said...

lovely M
john

Lorraine said...

beautiful, they love it I'm sure, what a beautiful portrait you painted with your words

BB said...

All little birds share joy...

Magyar said...

So good to see you all!!!!!
tnx, _m

Devika said...

thunder of the humming bird wings....so silent it must have been --

and yes, thanks for the explanation to using "this" -- no, it is not about right or wrong Magyar...but i thought "the" could as well refer to a specific hummingbird...or whatever referred specifically,

wishes,
devika