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Friday, September 2, 2011

Soon; this from late last Septober, or perhaps it was Octember_?


yellow leaves
float down this tired river
three ducks

10 comments:

joo said...

Beautiful, Magyar! Still green leaves here, but few more days and they'll start turning yellow:)
Have a nice weekend
j.

Gillena Cox said...

the hint at subtle movement is nicely expressed the ducks, the leaves

much love...

John McDonald said...

nice one M
john

Lorraine said...

I love this, if it were duck instead of ducks it would tell another story, I love it

Judie said...

One of the first signs that autumn is approaching--yellow leaves in the river. How lovely!!!

Magyar said...

__I thank you all... and soon I'll be spending more time blogging, the summer fading away as it is.
_m

Bill said...

Turning "float" into "floating" would make line 2 a pivot, if you're interested.

Magyar said...

Hello Bill!
__Thanks for the observation, and I fully understand; I dislike "ing words," and avoid them whenever I can... I choose the verb-ish rather than the noun-ish. A rather incorrect trait, I expect.
__Good to see you've returned!

Frank... said...

A gentle poem, Magyar...

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