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Sunday, November 6, 2011

With the time change, our sunrise is an hour early; the morning's first seam of this new day.


early sunrise
above the tree limb stitches
this days hem

7 comments:

John McDonald said...

nice one M
john

Lorraine said...

Very elegant and I can see it, I like that about you :)

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DOLORES said...

Very sensual. Like it.

Anonymous said...

Yes, very nice. I like the way you put an edge on the day.

Anonymous said...

I like the use of methapor!

I want to show you this haiku of our great German haikuist Gerd Börner. He had a similar feeling. Interesting - isn't it?

heaven and earth
summer rain
hemming the day

http://athenaeum-language.blogspot.com/2007/06/haiku-in-germanenglish-from-whc-german.html

I think you should write:
this day's hem (with apostrophe?)

Best wishes
Rudi

Magyar said...

__Thank you... John, and Lorraine, and welcome Lola. (Yup... I got it right that time.) Sandy? The edge of the day, lovit!
__Rudi, thank you for the presentation of the Borner haiku and links, interesting indeed. I only use (rightly or wrongly) in haiku/senryu, an occasional ellipsis, no punctuation.