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Friday, December 2, 2011

This...  is an echo I recently left at a friends blog; I think, here, the implied time is that 'eternal' season. _m


an owl counts
when the moon catches a star
this traveler

10 comments:

TALON said...

I loved it when I read it on my blog and I love it here, D. That is gorgeous!

John McDonald said...

lovely
john

Lorraine said...

So wise, so imaginable, well done Doug

sandy said...

This one hits me just right, too, Magyar.

Frieda said...

Simply beautiful...

Gillena Cox said...

the more i read it, the more i like it


much love...

Rudi Pfaller said...

Hi Magyar,

I would like to send you a variation - more minimalistic:

an owl counts
when the moon catches
a star

or:

an owl counts
every star
the moon is catching

I think "the travelor" is not necessary. For our german haiku-rules these words are to much interpretation.

I invite you - whenever you want - to send me some critical proposals. Really it does help me to develop.
Sometimes i miss exchange of ideas in my blog - as people do in a forum.

Best wishes
Rudi

Magyar said...

__I sincerly thank you all, my friends!
__And Rudi, I appreciate and understand your gracious view; I fully believe in the simplicity of haiku nad senryu. Here, I saw the moon as the traveler/catcher of the stars, and the owl... just keeping score.
__It seems haiku guide lines are different from language to language, place to place and, in fact, from person to person.
__Thanks Rudi... !_m

Warren said...

YOu need the traveler here, Mag - makes it that much more special, at least to my way of thinking (which may or may not be good).

Terrific!

Warren

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