Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
I loved it when I read it on my blog and I love it here, D. That is gorgeous!
So wise, so imaginable, well done Doug
This one hits me just right, too, Magyar.
the more i read it, the more i like itmuch love...
Hi Magyar,I would like to send you a variation - more minimalistic:an owl countswhen the moon catchesa staror:an owl countsevery starthe moon is catchingI think "the travelor" is not necessary. For our german haiku-rules these words are to much interpretation.I invite you - whenever you want - to send me some critical proposals. Really it does help me to develop.Sometimes i miss exchange of ideas in my blog - as people do in a forum.Best wishesRudi
__I sincerly thank you all, my friends!__And Rudi, I appreciate and understand your gracious view; I fully believe in the simplicity of haiku nad senryu. Here, I saw the moon as the traveler/catcher of the stars, and the owl... just keeping score. __It seems haiku guide lines are different from language to language, place to place and, in fact, from person to person. __Thanks Rudi... !_m
YOu need the traveler here, Mag - makes it that much more special, at least to my way of thinking (which may or may not be good).Terrific!Warren
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