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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Wednesday, June 18, 2014

From an old "scribble book;" the sunset and the heron on the wing, had enhanced the pond's lure.

days close
across this sunset pond
a great blue

15 comments:

Poet Laundry said...

A beautiful, tranquil scene Magyar. I'd like to be seeing it live right now...sigh...

Magyar said...

Jen, I thank you, your well recieved comment! At the at day's close, that sunset across the pond could be termed "a stellar campfire"? _m

Moonie said...

day yawns
golden finger paints the sky
moon smiles

some times the only way I can comment to you lovely inspirations is to write!

Magyar said...

Moonie; echoes.
__If... what I scribble inspires such an echo as your comment... my etchings, then, are not in vain! I sincerly thank you! _m

Lorraine Renaud said...

Oh Doug you give me such peace, something I can never find, I don't have enough money to get away, so I come here to be soothed

Vesper said...

Oh, a pond's lure... It will always work on me... :-)
Wonderful scene you've painted here!

Magyar said...

__Oh LL, I'm so glad that, that whice I see and record, isn't valueless; so happy you are soothed.
__Always _m

Magyar said...

__'The Chick with a Quill,' good to hear your >bird song< Vesper, and I thank you for your kind comment!

the fresh sun
sets aside the sour fog
bird song

__Oooops! You've seen that haiku before; smiles! _m

Jan said...

You have painted this scene beautifully in my soul, Doug...thank you~

Jan

Gillena Cox said...

no ripples the ponds blueness deepens

much love...

Bill said...

The apostrophe (day's) does make a difference. Nice moment.

Rachel said...

Lieber Magyar,

hier lässt es sich verweilen, einen feinen Augenblick hast du aufgefangen...

Alles nur Gute für dich
von Herzen
Rachel

Magyar said...

Thanks Jan and Gliiena!
__Bill, I severly minimize punctuation in that which I term haiku/senryu, just another >guess< for the readers; thanks for your observation!

Magyar said...

__Rachel, we would all like to extend those finer moments; memories hold them forever close. Thank you for your good wishes... as I return them to you! _m

haiku-shelf said...

I do like line three!