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Sunday, December 13, 2015

__The sunset shadows; this, a slim adjustment made to my imaginational comment I left at Iris's good haiku blog. The number of "S-es" now seems less cumbersome than I first thought. Ssmiless!
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sleepy swan
swims across my chest
sunset

11 comments:

Jennifer Wagner said...

Oh, I really like this one! Evocative!

Frank... said...

A beautiful moment, Magyar...

Jan said...

What a lovely picture you have painted with your "S-es"~

Vesper said...

So beautiful... really amazing!
The "swims across my chest" made me smile thinking about my cat who often takes naps across my husband's chest... :-)

Thank you for your kind wishes at my blog, Doug. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! Good health and happiness!

Bob Bushell said...

Oh yes, the haiku is beyond our world, lovely. Have a beautiful season of good will as well.

Frank... said...

Seasons Greetings, Magyar & all the best for the New Year!

Margie said...

Thanks for the visit and thoughtful wishes!
I am in contact with Lorraine and when I speak to her again (this week)I shall pass your greetings along to her.

I truly enjoyed your poem.
Best wishes to you and your family for a wonderful Christmas and happy New Year.

John Mcdonald said...

Great one M and may I wish you and yours a joyous Christmas and happy new year

Gillena Cox said...

Magyar
Thanks for sharing at "Lets Haiku A Christmas Carol 2015"

much love...

Lorraine Renaud said...

Sentimental and oh so beautiful, like the man who wrote it, phenomenal the very best of everything to you DD and your loving family xo

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__Thanks and a very Merry Christmas to you, all my friends; Margie and LL its been a long time! I hope all is well_!
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