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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Tuesday, April 26, 2016

__Breezes, as they cross the meadows green; meadows, rising as the tides, a tree's  spring leaves. _m

tidal breeze 
that rolls across this meadow
green sea

as buds burst
leaves stretch to the sun
a cat's purr

20 comments:

Rachel said...

So kommt der Frühling gut bei mir an, lieber Magyar.
Du weckst mit deinen Worten viele Sinne.

Dir noch eine gute Woche

LG; Rachel

Magyar said...

__With my awakened senses... to you too, Rachel, I wish a great week_! _m

Crafty Green Poet said...

beautiful image of the leaves unfurling as the cat purrs....

Bill said...

Both of these are nicely turned.

Bob Bushell said...

Lovingly put.

Ygraine said...

Beautifully moving...just as the Spring's tide moves within me...your amazing talent creates the visual image of Nature's perfection.:))

Jan said...

Lovely and beautiful
Paintings in words

Very nice, _m.

Jan

Lon Anderson said...

As I read your poem, it took me there, without my even leaving my chair.

Beautiful!!!

Gillena Cox said...

luv them both, my favorite, the second one for its juxtaposition

have a nice weekend Magyar

much love...

Sandy said...

Beautiful! It could have been written here.

Leslie Moon said...

what a glorious time of year when everything springs to life.
Glad you are enjoying the tidal breezes, Doug.

Gwil W said...

Life is a breeze
If only they knew it
dark men of confusion

joo said...

I love them:)

Optimistic Existentialist said...

I could close my eyes and feel the words after reading this...great job.

Magyar said...

__I truely thank you all: Juliet, "Y", Jan, Gillena, Moonie, Joo, Bob, Lon, Gwilym, and I welcome you Sandy and Kieth_! _m

Sandy said...

I wish I was there right now. Lovely.

Gisele LeBlanc said...

Beautiful! I especially love the second one, with the cat's purr -- great use of imagery! :)

sandy said...

love this.

Magyar said...

Thanks Gisele, so good to see you, 'tis been a while!
__Sandy_ Maine, and Sandy_ California... East to West... my thanks to you both!
_m

Gisele LeBlanc said...

You're welcome, Magyar! It has been a while -- the weeks have just been whooshing by! Hope you have a wonderful month of May! :)