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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Monday, May 2, 2016

__Time now, that I return to fewer words as I follow this well known saying, 'Less is ... .' _m

train whistle
wheels thunder on the tracks
smell of rain

12 comments:

Jennifer Wagner said...

I love the feel of this!

Jan said...

locomotion and
commotion...
fill the air

wonderful...loving this _m!!!

Magyar said...

Jen and Jan, [or is it Jan and Jen_? Smiles_!] Rain, so often arrives with thunder.
__For your understanding comments, I offer my acute thanks to you both! _m

Gwil W said...


(and now again . . .)

whistle blows
now look along the line

- see what's coming?

Optimistic Existentialist said...

I love the romantic sound of a train whistle in the distance...

Bob Bushell said...

The train whistles, fantastic.

Rachel said...

Lieber Magyar,
und wieder lässt du Bilder hier, die so herrlich am inneren Auge vorüberziehen.

LG; Rachel

Magyar said...

__I thank you, Guil, Keith and Bob_! Those distant sounds... the thunder, an owl, steeple bells, fog horns, a ship's tone, that fox's howl, the wind in the trees, and many more... all, are calls to imagine.
__Ah Rachel, those inner eyes can see so much more, I truly thank you. _m

sandy said...

and i could see, hear and feel it. nice.

Leslie Moon said...

who needs more when you write such excellent haiku. Wow the senses are full steam ahead with this one.

Ygraine said...

So evocative...the distant sound of a train rolling along the rails...heralding the approaching thunder?
Very nice...took me far away from this unremarkable day!:))

Magyar said...

__As always... Sandy, Moonie, and "Y", I vigorously value your visits and views_!
Smiles. _m