Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
The lazy summer carp Growing in the ponds Winter is behind the forest
Nice. And there's a haiku inside your haikuflat pondthe summerstands still
__ Ah Gwilym, those indolent carp, the only movement their gills syphoning oxygen and microscopic calories as they grow into the hidden winter.Oooo, Bill!__ Lovit, such a grand echo, thanks and I hope you keep this reflection for continued use. Nifty! Thanks friends! _m
Oh, I can feel the stillness. Wonderful imagery! :)
still waterslong hot dayspea green soup~Happy Sunday, _m.
I can see this! A perfect August poem.
silence -between moon and fisha ripplemuch love...
Very true words....indeed
It's like the circle of life. :)
Love your words, so poetic.
__ Friends, I truely appreciate your visits and comments! _m
i see it, thanks.
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