tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post2892061453644145163..comments2023-12-18T05:13:18.097-05:00Comments on Magyar Haiku: Magyarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-80873123471974234962011-10-18T14:12:18.966-04:002011-10-18T14:12:18.966-04:00the fog ambling over the warmer area is poetic to ...the fog ambling over the warmer area is poetic to say the least the lone crow strikes at the heart of the matter not even the fog is there to be his companion; nicely presented, with colour interest as well<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-84886328645291022952011-10-18T09:34:04.763-04:002011-10-18T09:34:04.763-04:00maybe it's the crow's breath, I love this ...maybe it's the crow's breath, I love this DougLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-3515991060308567082011-10-18T06:13:52.307-04:002011-10-18T06:13:52.307-04:00kind of you M re the haibun blog I made small chan...kind of you M re the haibun blog I made small changes to the last one and I always like to tell anyone who commented in case it changes their comments. thanks again for being a regular and much appreciated visitor<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-14798115143122168012011-10-18T05:49:22.387-04:002011-10-18T05:49:22.387-04:00I tramped some days in your bog...-)
I wrote seve...I tramped some days in your bog...-) <br />I wrote several versions and here is this one just for yours: <br /><br />crow's song <br />bogging the fog down <br />into the boghole<br /><br /><br />clue: Kalevala, where Joukahainen trying to bog down (into a swamp) King Wäinämöinen with his mighty song...Tikkishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16405806987636579199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-26205719612225045462011-10-16T20:36:12.293-04:002011-10-16T20:36:12.293-04:00I'm glade you liked this Sandy...
the cold mor...I'm glade you liked this Sandy...<br />the cold morning air, the flooded bogs.<br /><br />Nana... thanks; that is a lonely conflict, the fog of the warm and cold.<br /><br />Judie... Oh? Oh! 'Don't use the cranberries from ova here.' "Kathy<br />and I live in the heart of the Massachusetts cranberry country, just moments away from the O.S. original factory... ! Made in the USA<br /><br />John... I really enjoy your haibun blog, and I appreciate your visits and comments.<br /><br />Thank you all, my friends... floating to the top.<br /><br />friends<br />as cranberries float<br />see the truthMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-87479697613387523402011-10-16T17:54:29.695-04:002011-10-16T17:54:29.695-04:00Doug, thanks for the wonderful comment on my post!...Doug, thanks for the wonderful comment on my post!!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-11403101482588684752011-10-16T03:39:17.244-04:002011-10-16T03:39:17.244-04:00nice one M
johnnice one M<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-61170717445991045992011-10-15T22:58:56.157-04:002011-10-15T22:58:56.157-04:00My first thought was of the OceanSpray commercial....My first thought was of the OceanSpray commercial. Why? because my 8th grade sweetheart is the chubby old guy, standing in the bog with the young fellow.<br /><br />We really don't know what fog is in Tucson, as we rarely see it. I love Carl Sandburg's poem about fog.Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-62346532590415820822011-10-14T11:37:34.618-04:002011-10-14T11:37:34.618-04:00loneliness. though you mentioned 'warmer' ...loneliness. though you mentioned 'warmer' the idea of loneliness brought 'coldness' to mind.ImageNationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06021414643103601330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-16756063596657372312011-10-14T10:39:48.952-04:002011-10-14T10:39:48.952-04:00What atmosphere!
We are getting fog right now. I ...What atmosphere!<br /><br />We are getting fog right now. I can feel your poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com