tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post3301385596832813188..comments2023-12-18T05:13:18.097-05:00Comments on Magyar Haiku: Magyarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-62943417430630088872011-12-07T15:27:52.621-05:002011-12-07T15:27:52.621-05:00YOu need the traveler here, Mag - makes it that mu...YOu need the traveler here, Mag - makes it that much more special, at least to my way of thinking (which may or may not be good).<br /><br />Terrific!<br /><br />WarrenWarrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18267847448047212292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-35218295819040078802011-12-06T19:42:07.357-05:002011-12-06T19:42:07.357-05:00__I sincerly thank you all, my friends!
__And Rudi...__I sincerly thank you all, my friends!<br />__And Rudi, I appreciate and understand your gracious view; I fully believe in the simplicity of haiku nad senryu. Here, I saw the moon as the traveler/catcher of the stars, and the owl... just keeping score. <br />__It seems haiku guide lines are different from language to language, place to place and, in fact, from person to person. <br />__Thanks Rudi... !_mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-32691351502860964152011-12-06T18:01:39.622-05:002011-12-06T18:01:39.622-05:00Hi Magyar,
I would like to send you a variation -...Hi Magyar,<br /><br />I would like to send you a variation - more minimalistic:<br /><br />an owl counts<br />when the moon catches<br />a star<br /><br />or:<br /><br />an owl counts<br />every star<br />the moon is catching<br /><br />I think "the travelor" is not necessary. For our german haiku-rules these words are to much interpretation.<br /><br />I invite you - whenever you want - to send me some critical proposals. Really it does help me to develop.<br />Sometimes i miss exchange of ideas in my blog - as people do in a forum.<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RudiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-804611329532939432011-12-06T09:48:29.195-05:002011-12-06T09:48:29.195-05:00the more i read it, the more i like it
much love...the more i read it, the more i like it<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-40042730250012636962011-12-04T07:09:29.644-05:002011-12-04T07:09:29.644-05:00Simply beautiful...Simply beautiful...Friedahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01962339251837748280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-35702638945762031122011-12-03T11:45:29.260-05:002011-12-03T11:45:29.260-05:00This one hits me just right, too, Magyar.This one hits me just right, too, Magyar.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-78003051217719309372011-12-03T06:27:06.352-05:002011-12-03T06:27:06.352-05:00So wise, so imaginable, well done DougSo wise, so imaginable, well done DougLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-59430348268989182312011-12-03T03:30:01.733-05:002011-12-03T03:30:01.733-05:00lovely
johnlovely<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-20789198185887927522011-12-02T22:30:05.699-05:002011-12-02T22:30:05.699-05:00I loved it when I read it on my blog and I love it...I loved it when I read it on my blog and I love it here, D. That is gorgeous!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.com