tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post860908737342378094..comments2023-12-18T05:13:18.097-05:00Comments on Magyar Haiku: Magyarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-77613454413910250942011-08-08T06:42:13.301-04:002011-08-08T06:42:13.301-04:00very evocative and super use of words. Thankyou.very evocative and super use of words. Thankyou.Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-50244663242985606432011-08-07T23:07:18.411-04:002011-08-07T23:07:18.411-04:00Yea, there i have to agree too, Magyar...like as t...Yea, there i have to agree too, Magyar...like as they say for music is a vast ocean, so must be haiku...a vast, very vast ocean - but more and more i read, i like traditional haiku -- there's always more to it, <br /><br />anyway, that's just me, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-48480766835930477332011-08-07T21:28:16.952-04:002011-08-07T21:28:16.952-04:00Joo... as always I thank you, and I'm glad you...Joo... as always I thank you, and I'm glad you like my "scribbles."<br /><br />LL... That distant sound, always seems a tearful song of those departed souls. Best to you LL!<br /><br />Gillena... The moon belongs to us all, the sound to nnly those that hear it. As always, love to you! <br /><br />Sandy... Such thoughts that sound can incite! Fine wishes for your thoughts!<br /><br />Dev... Yeah, those crutch words I do -so often- try to avoid. Using them then, can explain the failure of my haiku; they, perhaps, become aphorisms. Yet, so often, some respected haijin will discribe what they expect the haiku/senryu guidelines are," then they write some of their haiku/senryu... out-of-bounds, according to their own pronounced guidelines. Thanks, Dev.!<br /><br />Kristin... And often the night birds add their comments. So good to see you Kristin! Thanks!<br /><br />John... Thanks always!<br /><br />Frank... So much can be imagined in that that is before your eyes, ain in your ears!<br /><br />I thank you all! _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-25945754011973802192011-08-05T09:07:46.778-04:002011-08-05T09:07:46.778-04:00A very atmospheric haiku, Magyar. I like it a lot....A very atmospheric haiku, Magyar. I like it a lot...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-7678784434412570832011-08-04T02:01:55.095-04:002011-08-04T02:01:55.095-04:00Oh, how I love trains! Moonlight and train sounds....Oh, how I love trains! Moonlight and train sounds...it sounds like your pond is a lovely place to be! Enjoy yourself. Love this poem!<br /><br />Sincerely,<br />KristinKristin Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16779222705654595462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-62832692591848601322011-08-04T00:11:40.261-04:002011-08-04T00:11:40.261-04:00'Our Moon' - when exactly did that happen!...'Our Moon' - when exactly did that happen!? <br /><br />okay, i remember you saying...the purest believes whatever in front of their eyes to be theirs - leave the question...the pure shall not be questioned :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-8473893524146486762011-08-04T00:08:38.158-04:002011-08-04T00:08:38.158-04:00'Our Moon' - when exactly did that happen!...'Our Moon' - when exactly did that happen!? <br /><br />'this' 'that' and i presume 'ours' too is a no-no in haiku, I read -- <br />shouldn't that be avoided? (i remember i spoke with you of "this")<br /><br />just asking -- a student's doubt who learned about haiku here as well, Magyar....You won't believe i've been discussing haiku with two teachers here :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-23034624885499487532011-08-03T16:22:46.104-04:002011-08-03T16:22:46.104-04:00A train whistle is one of those sounds that can se...A train whistle is one of those sounds that can send you off in a direction, isn't it? <br /><br />This is going to be one of my favorites.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-77285557911255783332011-08-03T15:41:49.501-04:002011-08-03T15:41:49.501-04:00moon and whistle, nice journey couplets
much lov...moon and whistle, nice journey couplets<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-78442612712069666202011-08-03T06:42:02.224-04:002011-08-03T06:42:02.224-04:00There is nothing I love more, well maybe a few thi...There is nothing I love more, well maybe a few things then the long-distant mournful sound of a train...I love this so much DougLorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-64777017293265516512011-08-03T04:55:22.345-04:002011-08-03T04:55:22.345-04:00Oh, so lovely:)Oh, so lovely:)joohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09157508274122128501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-63127758758094101662011-08-03T02:52:47.911-04:002011-08-03T02:52:47.911-04:00nice couple M
johnnice couple M<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.com