tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post4404648398974972322..comments2023-12-18T05:13:18.097-05:00Comments on Magyar Haiku: Magyarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-84592258782805715402009-07-12T18:44:38.599-04:002009-07-12T18:44:38.599-04:00My deepest thanks to all of you! _mMy deepest thanks to all of you! _mMagyarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834296565844877410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-21379460982694363552009-07-10T19:48:15.711-04:002009-07-10T19:48:15.711-04:00i'm reading two haikus here;
one resonating t...i'm reading two haikus here;<br /><br />one resonating the other; and in the second the addition of a constant before the interlude of stillness<br /><br />very nice<br /><br /><i>much love<br />gillena</i>Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-9685640388267677402009-07-10T17:15:15.558-04:002009-07-10T17:15:15.558-04:00Magyar, so much wonderful sound in the foreground ...Magyar, so much wonderful sound in the foreground and just enough in the distant background.Laurie A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11835435551938917829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-80106568086046023812009-07-10T07:01:49.297-04:002009-07-10T07:01:49.297-04:00First thought: too much. Second thought: but a goo...First thought: too much. Second thought: but a good story. Very complex in the beginning, just an exact moment when my mind works on it. <br /><br />(Why should it be easy for the reader, when it was hard work for the poet?)<br /><br />Best wishes<br />RalfRalf Brökerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-77156614197630777442009-07-10T04:07:54.167-04:002009-07-10T04:07:54.167-04:00great music M
johngreat music M<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-86086456409914026702009-07-09T05:48:26.705-04:002009-07-09T05:48:26.705-04:00lost
in the deep forest --
There! The highway!lost <br />in the deep forest -- <br />There! The highway!Tikkishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16405806987636579199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-10795091667766966942009-07-07T21:11:42.098-04:002009-07-07T21:11:42.098-04:00Lovely, Magyar. Reminds me of the lonesome highway...Lovely, Magyar. Reminds me of the lonesome highway...norahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02228725106863747984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-61681672388172797872009-07-07T16:50:36.698-04:002009-07-07T16:50:36.698-04:00I prefer to say a little bit more about content an...I prefer to say a little bit more about content and form.<br />I mean the juxtaposition is well done. Pond (the pond of Basho, where the frog jumps?), the criquets (another traditional motive) and the rain (I remind of kus of the poor Issa about rain) are in a perfect position to the highway. The ku brings together nature and modern civilization.<br /><br />Good example for kus!<br /><br />RudiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-62926152002609983322009-07-07T16:49:19.963-04:002009-07-07T16:49:19.963-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-74784823690736101062009-07-07T10:00:42.980-04:002009-07-07T10:00:42.980-04:00very nice! I love the sounds of nature!very nice! I love the sounds of nature!Cindybrownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12991336185986473331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-74442409587788602012009-07-07T08:00:27.749-04:002009-07-07T08:00:27.749-04:00so much more musical than cars... I like this very...so much more musical than cars... I like this very much!Lorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806777462816001013.post-22019354799325937192009-07-07T07:37:12.682-04:002009-07-07T07:37:12.682-04:00Nice scene, Magyar
Its like a setting for a movie...Nice scene, Magyar <br />Its like a setting for a movie, :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.com