Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
beach music: the clam shell's rattle and the surf. You paint a vivid, peaceful image, Magyar!
I just can't say anything NORA said it all and oh so beautifully lol
oh! you heard them rattle?? :)nice one, Magyar :)wishes, devika
A lovely mixture of sounds; as Nora said, "beach music". A serene scene in words...
Oh, I am a bit nasty tonight (after a long working week's end): could be an oyster dinner at the beach-restaurant, too ;-)(But of course: in serious moments this is a wonderful view into the sea.)Best wishesRalf
good one Mjohn
I wish to be on the beach after reading this. Very nice!-Kristin
This has the real haiku feel.
as nora says, beach music, i love that sound of shells rattling in the tide
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