Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
Really exquisite, Magyar. Great juxtaposition!
I was just noticing that my male finches were looking dull yesterday at the bird feeder.
(Sorry I deleted my first comment-I noticed a typo).I love how autumn is creeping into our worlds and into our writing...it's fun to watch. :) Beautiful!!!
Brings to mind that song, "Early Autumn."
Its morning here, and the sun is quite bright...we don't have finches or maple trees, so each line of this calls for my imagination and recall of pictures i've seen...why say all this, I like it, Magyar :)Wishes, devika
nice one Mjohn
mmmm maple trees are my favourite, I love this _m ;)
I can see a lot of autumn in this. Somehow melancholic, somehow easy going. Very nice one.Best wishesRalf
delightful, as always
"losing color" gives us a new way of looking at autumn.
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