Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
nice ;) had to be a dark path I guess, but the pumpkins are so very bright in colour, it somehow does not fit to halloween :)
pumpkins are so lovely and bright, and I like the sound of this word. Their English name is much nicer than Polish!Have a great week ahead:)
Very nice for this Halloween season :)
"knotted path" - I love that, Magyar! I am imagining the pumpkins with candles flickering lighting up that dark walk just a little, but making the space between even spookier.
more than poetry, this sounds more like a pumpkin-math-riddle for children -- with alphabets and numbers -- you know it, no? :)Halloween as i know is the venting out of all animal instincts in man...a must do, atleast once in a year, when humans are becoming sophisticated...or is this world a daily halloween!? whatever, now this haiku looks like poetry to me! :) wishes, devika
DEV... __Is it possible that halloween is ALL 364 days of the year? __The masks, the costumes, the make-up, that acting and fase hair, the false image... and on that 365th day, we finally admit to the scam, and find fun in that admission? :-)__Your words: "or is this world a daily halloween!?"__ASHI, as always... Halloween a conrtary, both dark and light; JOO, what is -pumpkin-(?) in polish; CINDY, I do so enjoy watching the youngsters cavort; TALON... just as I had thought, a twisted path lined with candle-eyed, pumpkin-faces.__I thank you all! _m
Magyar, that's exactly why i said "a must do, atleast once in a year, when humans are becoming sophisticated" -- sophistication to be in the veins will take some time, may be, or may not be at all!Happy Halloween! whichever way you celebrate :)wishes, devika
a touch of whimsical and spooky, I love it!
Nice haiku, Magyar. "along this knotted path" is a great line...
I like the idea of the pumpkin knot path. So timely!
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