Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
__I'm not happy with rhymes in haiku, snow / crow, but it is, as it was seen... this morning's whispy snow. _m
sometimes a rhyme adds to haiku if it occurs naturally... today was the warmest day ever measured in february here (21C in ljubljana)
Pure picture, but with a real emotional charge.
In this instance I see nothing wrong with the rhyme in this haiku, Magyar. Nice one!...
I like the image of the snow sifting through the branches. This is a pretty haiku.
You'll laugh, D, but until you mentioned the rhyme, I didn't notice. I did notice the beautiful imagery in my mind your words evoked though. :)
Leblos der Hügeldarunter reges LebenAmeisen rüstenDu Lieber, dein Bildsprache ist fantastisch:-)Alles Liebe für dichvon Herzen, Rachel
I like the reference to sifting the snow...wonderful! You have a real talent for haiku.http://www.myreallifereviews.com/2012/03/march-prize-draw-at-my-real-life.html
__Ich danke lhnen Rachel, als meine Ubersetzung bietet, diese Hugel von Ameisen eiln. Ein gutes image als auch.__Beste Wunsche guter Freund! _m
__POLONA... so glad to have your visit and comment, welcome again!__BILL... I always aooreciate your comments!__SANDY... it was a light snow shower that stopped as quickly as it began.__K... glad you liked this... it was scribbled in an instant, as seen and un-changed. __Thanks, to you all!
__GERALDINE... -flower through the screen- thanks new friend!
Nicely put...:)Take care
At first I wrote this one as a comment: lonely tree ready for crows'nestingBut then found a photo and made this one, and put it in my blog today.http://juhatik.blogspot.com/2012/03/busy-tree-not-yet-ready-for-crows.html
A memorable ku. Enjoyed reading.
__Thanks Sam and Tikkis, and Rita... you are always welcome here, thanks to you as well! _m
A cool haunting atmosphere youhave penned, Magyar.
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