Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
three separate images wonderfully intertwined
oh what coincidence,Today, I went back to read Virginia Woof's 'The Waves,' which was originally named "The Moths" Somehow, moths and light has been in my mind for quite a while..."kind wind" -- works so well, Magyar...loved the justaposition here :)wishes, devika
stunning how these images blend into a story of a breath and a life...
really compelling, Magyar. Well done.
Powerful verse and imagery.
The moth and candle flame, are one harmonious entity, and the the wind the second entity introduced; your haiku is nicely sliced into a fragment of natural bonding; and a phrase of surprise much lovegillena
My warmest thanks to you all, for these comments that are above my realm! _m
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