candle flame
this moth follows its call
a kind wind
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
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Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
8 comments:
three separate images wonderfully intertwined
oh what coincidence,
Today, I went back to read Virginia Woof's 'The Waves,' which was originally named "The Moths"
Somehow, moths and light has been in my mind for quite a while...
"kind wind" -- works so well, Magyar...loved the justaposition here :)
wishes,
devika
stunning how these images blend into a story of a breath and a life...
really compelling, Magyar. Well done.
well said!
Powerful verse and imagery.
The moth and candle flame, are one harmonious entity, and the the wind the second entity introduced; your haiku is nicely sliced into a fragment of natural bonding; and a phrase of surprise
much love
gillena
My warmest thanks to you all, for these comments that are above my realm! _m
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