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Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Thank you, Polona, your most recent haiga brought this to mind. It was first seen at the adventerous site, wonderhaikuworlds, on 4/29/07. I'm never content with that which I write, so this has been altered some.

gray dawn
the only sunrise...
a forsythia

6 comments:

Devika said...

WOW!

loved this one, Magyar :)
never content -- so true when it comes to haiku...But I'm never patient with working on syllables/revisions... it has been a great learning here :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

great one m
john

polona said...

you are welcome :)
and i like yours better...

this also brings to mind this scene from a couple of winters ago:

lingering fog
persimmons
the only sunshine

RBroeker said...

It shines in me.

Best wishes
Ralf

Frank Williams said...

Nice one - I love forsythia...

Janice Thomson said...

Wonderful!
Forsythia is so beautiful.