Thank you, Polona, your most recent haiga brought this to mind. It was first seen at the adventerous site, wonderhaikuworlds, on 4/29/07. I'm never content with that which I write, so this has been altered some.
gray dawn
the only sunrise...
a forsythia
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
6 comments:
WOW!
loved this one, Magyar :)
never content -- so true when it comes to haiku...But I'm never patient with working on syllables/revisions... it has been a great learning here :)
wishes,
devika
great one m
john
you are welcome :)
and i like yours better...
this also brings to mind this scene from a couple of winters ago:
lingering fog
persimmons
the only sunshine
It shines in me.
Best wishes
Ralf
Nice one - I love forsythia...
Wonderful!
Forsythia is so beautiful.
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