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Thursday, March 26, 2009

Yesterday, I found the first Rod McKuen book I purchased in 1969 (or thereabout,) "Listen to the Warm," I always liked those words and today, of them, I scribbled this (sort of) Cinq.


listen
to the warm breeze
seeping through the lilacs
into every awakened sense
new dawn

10 comments:

Devika said...

lovely, Magyar :)

when wind turns a warm breeze....it awakens in every sense....

wishes,
devika

Janice Thomson said...

Oh yes - can feel, see and smell it so sharply. Beautiful write Magyar.

Dalloway said...

this one it appeals to the senses - nicely done

nora said...

just wonderful, Magyar!

polona said...

there's a real sense of spring in this, scents and all. wonderful

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I agree with Janice :)

John McDonald said...

nice one
john

RBroeker said...

Yes, I like it.

Best wishes
Ralf

Gillena Cox said...

new dawn
ive heard those sounds
kisadee kisadee
yesterday and before those
bird songs

Magyar said...

My thanks to you all!
_Gilena, I doff my cap to your response! It's happily recieved, and better'n mine! Lovit.
_m