Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
A fine picture in words, Magyar :)wishes, devika
An atmospheric haiku - "broom whisks" is very apt...
what a beautiful and evocative choice of words...Ive missed quite a few gems of yours while I was away... I particularly like your 'pigeons' one.
Reminds me of German writers who adapt haiku to lyrics.Rudi
You sprout magic Magyar...I love the feeling this gave so much, I'm awed...
i LOVE THIS!! I can get such a clear picture! Very nice!!
delightful and apt. Well-done, my friend!
I don't know many of the words - and while searching the German translation I finde so much layers. Now it is a multi-riddle to me, which sounds great. Will try to come to a clear picture in my mind in the next time.Best wishesRalf
This is so delightful an image pictured in my mind. I can feel the night breeze and see the shadows - how wonderfully put.
beautiful "picture"- I can see and hear it.
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