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Tuesday, May 12, 2009

The rainy sunset's ember, a promise of tomorrow.

day's ember
a promise in the rain
doves coo

John McDonald translated this into Scotts, on 9/16/2007, at WHW.

day's aizle
a hecht i the weet
doos croodle

I thank you again, John!
_m

10 comments:

Dalloway said...

the landscape is very much alive in this one... delightful

Janice Thomson said...

"day's ember" - I like that line. A tranquil scene to ponder and enjoy.

Devika said...

Yes, a very evocative scene Magyar :)

wishes,
devika

Lorraine said...

Enchanting in both languages, bravo Magyar, I love it :)

nora said...

I love the hai-coo, and I love my friends' collaboration.

RBroeker said...

Mmmmh, may I say that in my school-exchange-days "coo" had a special meaning? It would just turn everything upside down, I fear ... Oh la la, _m!

Best wishes
Ralf

polona said...

sometimes nature provides most amazing scenes... a delightful one

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

lovely, both ways. :)

Frank Williams said...

A delightful haiku...

Magyar said...

I think I've said... links at the pond are chancy, here I'm happy to thank you all for your comments!
_m