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Monday, July 20, 2009

Kathy, just... didnt see me.

I wave to you
across this empty common
a pigeon replies

9 comments:

Devika said...

Nice one, Magyar...i like the satire,:)

wishes,
devika

Cindybrown said...

Very nice:)

Rudi Pfaller said...

I had to consult an online-dictionary, but I got the sense. Bitter-sweet juxtaposition (waving to a partner / pigeon, formerly used as messinger). Your partner in communication and this answering pigeon fit to each other. Very interesting ku.

Best wishes
Rudi

Cindybrown said...

Magyar, I love what you wrote in your comment on my blog. That was beautiful!! It really said what i feel..

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nice!

John McDonald said...

good one M
john

Frank Williams said...

Love this one. Over the years I have written a lot of pigeon haiku...

Lorraine said...

Oh lol love it, love the croak, at least I hope it was that call of nature ;)

Timoteo said...

A sense of space...a disconnect...between lovers?