Kathy, just... didnt see me.
I wave to you
across this empty common
a pigeon replies
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Monday, July 20, 2009
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9 comments:
Nice one, Magyar...i like the satire,:)
wishes,
devika
Very nice:)
I had to consult an online-dictionary, but I got the sense. Bitter-sweet juxtaposition (waving to a partner / pigeon, formerly used as messinger). Your partner in communication and this answering pigeon fit to each other. Very interesting ku.
Best wishes
Rudi
Magyar, I love what you wrote in your comment on my blog. That was beautiful!! It really said what i feel..
nice!
good one M
john
Love this one. Over the years I have written a lot of pigeon haiku...
Oh lol love it, love the croak, at least I hope it was that call of nature ;)
A sense of space...a disconnect...between lovers?
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