Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
How unique and refreshing...so magical :)
We are somewhat of the same mind today as I also posted about a heronhere :)Wonderful cinquain Magyar.
yes, when it comes to the question of survival -- alone is the way...birds know that better than us, i guessGood one, Magyar :)wishes, devika
Magyar,I had to read and reread the 4th line before it got through to me.Now I see that heron walking along with every fiber of it's being alert for both danger and for food.I like it.
i enjoyed the 's' alliterationmuch loegillena
enjoyed this Mjohn
For me, a short time window here... just to thank you all for the visit! _Gileena... You have truely justified my use of the S's... they seem (to me) to amplify the Senses, Survival, and the Search. _m
I think the single words silent and alone at the beginning and the end are very powerful...causes me to feel for him. Very nice.
I have indeed seen this behaviour -nicely observed Magyar...
Just want to say that I can hear the scene: walk, walk, walk, walk - - - dunking...Best wishesRalf
I was observing a heron just a few days ago at the big duck pond in one of our local parks...wonderful imagery.
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