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Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Off... to the pond, 'tele a to.'

silent
the heron walks
and wades along this shore
a sense on sense survival search
alone

12 comments:

Lorraine said...

How unique and refreshing...so magical :)

Janice Thomson said...

We are somewhat of the same mind today as I also posted about a heron
here :)
Wonderful cinquain Magyar.

Devika said...

yes, when it comes to the question of survival -- alone is the way...birds know that better than us, i guess

Good one, Magyar :)

wishes,
devika

T.Migratorius said...

Magyar,
I had to read and reread the 4th line before it got through to me.
Now I see that heron walking along with every fiber of it's being alert for both danger and for food.
I like it.

Gillena Cox said...

i enjoyed the 's' alliteration

much loe
gillena

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this M
john

Magyar said...

For me, a short time window here... just to thank you all for the visit!
_Gileena... You have truely justified my use of the S's... they seem (to me) to amplify the Senses, Survival, and the Search.

_m

Kristin Riggs said...

I think the single words silent and alone at the beginning and the end are very powerful...causes me to feel for him. Very nice.

Frank Williams said...

I have indeed seen this behaviour -nicely observed Magyar...

RBroeker said...

Just want to say that I can hear the scene: walk, walk, walk, walk - - - dunking...

Best wishes
Ralf

Laure said...

beautiful, Magyar!

Timoteo said...

I was observing a heron just a few days ago at the big duck pond in one of our local parks...wonderful imagery.