Off... to the pond, 'tele a to.'
silent
the heron walks
and wades along this shore
a sense on sense survival search
alone
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Wednesday, August 19, 2009
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How unique and refreshing...so magical :)
We are somewhat of the same mind today as I also posted about a heron
here :)
Wonderful cinquain Magyar.
yes, when it comes to the question of survival -- alone is the way...birds know that better than us, i guess
Good one, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
Magyar,
I had to read and reread the 4th line before it got through to me.
Now I see that heron walking along with every fiber of it's being alert for both danger and for food.
I like it.
i enjoyed the 's' alliteration
much loe
gillena
enjoyed this M
john
For me, a short time window here... just to thank you all for the visit!
_Gileena... You have truely justified my use of the S's... they seem (to me) to amplify the Senses, Survival, and the Search.
_m
I think the single words silent and alone at the beginning and the end are very powerful...causes me to feel for him. Very nice.
I have indeed seen this behaviour -nicely observed Magyar...
Just want to say that I can hear the scene: walk, walk, walk, walk - - - dunking...
Best wishes
Ralf
beautiful, Magyar!
I was observing a heron just a few days ago at the big duck pond in one of our local parks...wonderful imagery.
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