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Friday, September 25, 2009

No... not my last brick, but now... a nail. (punctuation?)

a rusty nail
there hang the old blue-jeans
this barn

7 comments:

John McDonald said...

delightful
john

Frank Williams said...

A lovely picture in words Magyar - love the nostalgia...

RBroeker said...

Well, it could be a love affair as well, couldn't it?

Best wishes
Ralf

Janice Thomson said...

Like the many places this takes me. Wonderfully layered haiku Magyar.

Kristin Riggs said...

What pictures you paint with you paint with your works, Magyar! I love this.

Theresa Williams said...

Thanks much for stopping by my blog and commenting on my post about the cat skull. I love this haiku, and I see I must investigate your blog further. And I see you are from Cape Cod. I was so lucky to have had the chance to live in Provincetown for a whole summer in 2008 at the Fine Arts Work Center. Delightful to meet you.

Tikkis said...

hanged
blue-jeans --
my happy life

(Anyway that is a hay(na)ku?)
In your text includes quite many good points, but not too many.

- Which one you saved, the nail, or those jeans?