No... not my last brick, but now... a nail. (punctuation?)
a rusty nail
there hang the old blue-jeans
this barn
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Friday, September 25, 2009
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delightful
john
A lovely picture in words Magyar - love the nostalgia...
Well, it could be a love affair as well, couldn't it?
Best wishes
Ralf
Like the many places this takes me. Wonderfully layered haiku Magyar.
What pictures you paint with you paint with your works, Magyar! I love this.
Thanks much for stopping by my blog and commenting on my post about the cat skull. I love this haiku, and I see I must investigate your blog further. And I see you are from Cape Cod. I was so lucky to have had the chance to live in Provincetown for a whole summer in 2008 at the Fine Arts Work Center. Delightful to meet you.
hanged
blue-jeans --
my happy life
(Anyway that is a hay(na)ku?)
In your text includes quite many good points, but not too many.
- Which one you saved, the nail, or those jeans?
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