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Sunday, October 4, 2009

For a friend

moondrips
quietly fall
with the soft evening rain
each drops glow of this empty sky
written

8 comments:

Kristin Riggs said...

Okay, not to be dramatic, but my breath caught in my chest when I read the words "moondrips"...I love that. It sounds so enchanting and romantic. I want them to fall on me. :)

-KR

Devika said...

elements of sadness in there...but, made for a nice poem, Magyar :)

wishes,
devika

nora said...

Well captured, Magyar, and thank you.

Lorraine said...

the softness is soothing...and I also love your usae of 'moondrips' one of those magical words :)

Dalloway said...

delightful

Janice Thomson said...

I just loved how this flowed right from that first lovely word.
Beautiful Magyar.

John McDonald said...

good one M
john

BlueJayEye said...

loved the smooth progression of words, truly a glowing moondrips...