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Sunday, October 4, 2009

For a friend

quietly fall
with the soft evening rain
each drops glow of this empty sky


Kristin Riggs said...

Okay, not to be dramatic, but my breath caught in my chest when I read the words "moondrips"...I love that. It sounds so enchanting and romantic. I want them to fall on me. :)


Devika said...

elements of sadness in there...but, made for a nice poem, Magyar :)


nora said...

Well captured, Magyar, and thank you.

Lorraine said...

the softness is soothing...and I also love your usae of 'moondrips' one of those magical words :)

Dalloway said...


Janice Thomson said...

I just loved how this flowed right from that first lovely word.
Beautiful Magyar.

John McDonald said...

good one M

BlueJayEye said...

loved the smooth progression of words, truly a glowing moondrips...