For a friend
moondrips
quietly fall
with the soft evening rain
each drops glow of this empty sky
written
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Sunday, October 4, 2009
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Okay, not to be dramatic, but my breath caught in my chest when I read the words "moondrips"...I love that. It sounds so enchanting and romantic. I want them to fall on me. :)
-KR
elements of sadness in there...but, made for a nice poem, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
Well captured, Magyar, and thank you.
the softness is soothing...and I also love your usae of 'moondrips' one of those magical words :)
delightful
I just loved how this flowed right from that first lovely word.
Beautiful Magyar.
good one M
john
loved the smooth progression of words, truly a glowing moondrips...
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