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__I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.

Monday, October 26, 2009

From a recent comment... this changed thought.

horizon...
the mountains watch a near storm
night fall

13 comments:

Devika said...

something very intense about the scene,

Good one, Magyar...enjoyed :)

wishes,
devika

John McDonald said...

nice one M
john

joo said...

I can almost see the view! Really nice.
Greetings:)

Lorraine said...

YOu have such a way with Haiku, something I simply am unable to achieve...wonderful!

BlueJayEye said...

a lovely landscape and imaginative effect too M_

Magyar said...

_I thank you all for your generous comments!
_Dev, I may be -too- intense.
_Lorraine, you are -over- generous!
_John, as always I'm pleased by your comments!
_Jay, this haiku would not have been, had this -landscape- not appeared on Joo's blog. Worth the 'click!'
thx again! _m

Kristin Riggs said...

I like the idea that the mountains see what's coming first...this is great, Magyar. :)

catching a prowler
just beyond the clouds-
night watchman

Nana Fredua-Agyeman said...

I came and I am not disappointed. I really like your haiku...the mountains watching over the horizon. it's a good piece, my friend.

Rudi Pfaller said...

I like the animation of mountains.
Best wishes
Rudi

RBroeker said...

Do they? Of course they do! And they have a poetic comerade ;-)

Best wishes
Ralf

Timoteo said...

Quiet reflection...returning to this state by reading your work. A place I like to be.

Tikkis said...

a calm night --
distant mountains
awake


Also a short hay(na)ku for kristin:

this cloudy darkness --
the milkman
tinkles

Kristin Riggs said...

Tikkis-I love it!!! Thank you. :)