From a recent comment... this changed thought.
horizon...
the mountains watch a near storm
night fall
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Monday, October 26, 2009
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something very intense about the scene,
Good one, Magyar...enjoyed :)
wishes,
devika
nice one M
john
I can almost see the view! Really nice.
Greetings:)
YOu have such a way with Haiku, something I simply am unable to achieve...wonderful!
a lovely landscape and imaginative effect too M_
_I thank you all for your generous comments!
_Dev, I may be -too- intense.
_Lorraine, you are -over- generous!
_John, as always I'm pleased by your comments!
_Jay, this haiku would not have been, had this -landscape- not appeared on Joo's blog. Worth the 'click!'
thx again! _m
I like the idea that the mountains see what's coming first...this is great, Magyar. :)
catching a prowler
just beyond the clouds-
night watchman
I came and I am not disappointed. I really like your haiku...the mountains watching over the horizon. it's a good piece, my friend.
I like the animation of mountains.
Best wishes
Rudi
Do they? Of course they do! And they have a poetic comerade ;-)
Best wishes
Ralf
Quiet reflection...returning to this state by reading your work. A place I like to be.
a calm night --
distant mountains
awake
Also a short hay(na)ku for kristin:
this cloudy darkness --
the milkman
tinkles
Tikkis-I love it!!! Thank you. :)
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