Haiku, Senryu, and an occasional Haibun or Cinquain
So soft and pretty, Magyar. I love the deep cups of lilies - perfect for sun catching.
Pretty! I love tiger lilies:)
the child in me is smiling, Magyar...It iiizz beautiful :)wishes, devika
Oh! This could go either way, I like it!
But fourwindshaiga...that we could make it work either way...or in more ways than one is the fun part of haiku, no? I love your haiga...especially the pictures :)Isn't it so Magyar? :)wishes, devika
__Tiger lilies, open to a new day's sun,__Open to a new day's sun, this swallow tail.__I avoid the word, To me (only, I expect) >butterfly< is over used; I choose the call names of thosw flys. Here "Tiger" Swallowtail is implied, and Yes Dev, the reader can imagine... within their own concept, an aspect (of what some call) haiku. _m
yes, i think I agree...haiku butterflies as I begin to see them in general...and I too prefer names of butterflies,plants....infact i have seen even Sun named as Khazak Sun, Ozark Sun, in poems...and it adds a charm, i thought :)i think haiku interests me for its many aspects...its simplicity sometimes becomes a puzzle of complexity for me :)Nice to have your note, Magyar :)wishes, devikawishes, devika
Lieber Magyar,herrrrrrlich, schön, lächel...ich mag diese Schwalbenschwänze auch, sie sind in meinen Augen kleine Kolibris...herzlichst, Rachel
a beautiful sunsplashed sketchmuch lovegillena
Thank you all, my new and long time friends!__What I need to do... is edit MY own remarks... spelling, typos punctuation. Ugly!_m
another beaut Mjohn
Liebe Rachel,und ja! Die Kolibris und Schwalbenschwanze... Schwung durch den Tiger-lilien. Ich freue mich uberIch freue uber Ihren Desuch hier, herzlichst! _m
I think Devika nailed it--the complexity of such simplicity, the simplicity of such complexity.
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