The color, the name... and a child smiles.
tiger lilies
open to a new day's sun
this swallow tail
- Magyar
- Cape Cod, United States
- __I see with young eyes, an old mirror. Here, I hope to offer... as I see.
Sunday, June 20, 2010
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So soft and pretty, Magyar. I love the deep cups of lilies - perfect for sun catching.
Pretty! I love tiger lilies:)
the child in me is smiling, Magyar...It iiizz beautiful :)
wishes,
devika
delightful :)
Oh! This could go either way, I like it!
But fourwindshaiga...that we could make it work either way...or in more ways than one is the fun part of haiku, no? I love your haiga...especially the pictures :)
Isn't it so Magyar? :)
wishes,
devika
__Tiger lilies, open to a new day's sun,
__Open to a new day's sun, this swallow tail.
__I avoid the word, To me (only, I expect) >butterfly< is over used; I choose the call names of thosw flys. Here "Tiger" Swallowtail is implied, and Yes Dev, the reader can imagine... within their own concept, an aspect (of what some call) haiku. _m
yes, i think I agree...haiku butterflies as I begin to see them in general...and I too prefer names of butterflies,plants....infact i have seen even Sun named as Khazak Sun, Ozark Sun, in poems...and it adds a charm, i thought :)
i think haiku interests me for its many aspects...its simplicity sometimes becomes a puzzle of complexity for me :)
Nice to have your note, Magyar :)
wishes,
devika
wishes,
devika
Lieber Magyar,
herrrrrrlich, schön, lächel...
ich mag diese Schwalbenschwänze auch, sie sind in meinen Augen kleine Kolibris...
herzlichst, Rachel
a beautiful sunsplashed sketch
much love
gillena
Love!!
Thank you all, my new and long time friends!
__What I need to do... is edit MY own remarks... spelling, typos punctuation. Ugly!
_m
another beaut M
john
Liebe Rachel,
und ja! Die Kolibris und Schwalbenschwanze... Schwung durch den Tiger-lilien.
Ich freue mich uber
Ich freue uber Ihren Desuch hier, herzlichst! _m
I think Devika nailed it--the complexity of such simplicity, the simplicity of such complexity.
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